My name is Phoenix. I guess you could say I was inspired <3
Such an interesting idea! There could be more detail on the wings, and I agree that there should be gray on your chin, but altogether it is very cool.
It is well done, there actually is a native american phoenix warpaint that is similar. Yours is not the same style, but there are similarities. I might have added some grayness going from the lips downward in some fashion... signifying the rise from the ashes.
aha, cool! I hope you like my plan too^^