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Why didn't you pay the Pied Piper?
Now all but one of the thirty seven children are stolen away...
The Pied Piper did all you asked
took all the rats, removed the plague.
You didn't pay, you wouldn't reward
the Pied Piper with flute for sword
And with that beautiful weapon the Piper seized
your children, thirty six, lead away with ease.
Did the Pied Piper enjoy this task?
Leading the children like he lead the rats?
Taking them from heart and home
to punish the greedy, let them live alone.
But the greedy were not the only ones now alone
the children, the children, taken from home
what did the piper do to protect them?
Let them not realize what had befallen?
With rats it began, with rat babies it ended
Pied Piper, a sorcerer. The children, transformed.
With regret the Pied Piper plays on, his honor defended.
Always followed by a rat horde
numbering always, thirty six strong.
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Now all but one of the thirty seven children are stolen away...
The Pied Piper did all you asked
took all the rats, removed the plague.
You didn't pay, you wouldn't reward
the Pied Piper with flute for sword
And with that beautiful weapon the Piper seized
your children, thirty six, lead away with ease.
Did the Pied Piper enjoy this task?
Leading the children like he lead the rats?
Taking them from heart and home
to punish the greedy, let them live alone.
But the greedy were not the only ones now alone
the children, the children, taken from home
what did the piper do to protect them?
Let them not realize what had befallen?
With rats it began, with rat babies it ended
Pied Piper, a sorcerer. The children, transformed.
With regret the Pied Piper plays on, his honor defended.
Always followed by a rat horde
numbering always, thirty six strong.
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Then we get on with it
not personally take what I write, it's just my own personal opinion, OK?
I do not know what should be the, quite frankly
These naked creatures bottom right of the image does not fit to my opinion.
The idea with the animal in the eye is not bad, but not particularly well implemented.
I'm thinking you'd have again ran to the picture
Well all I can not write to it.
I hope my review will help you a bit further.
Please do not be angry because of the honest criticism, it's just my humble opinion
hugs Jassy